The narrator tells the story, but is not involved. He or she becomes an observer. In the case of an omniscient narrator, the teller will know all and see all. The thoughts, feelings, plans and schemes of the characters are known to the reader. The narrator can be known or unknown. Third Person. Third person attached moves closer.
You move into the head of one or more of your characters. You can tell your story using only one character or you can use several.
Multiple viewpoints are used to great effect, but remember to stick to one viewpoint per scene. Too many viewpoints annoy readers. You also have to create distinct voices for each character. In a short story you would, most likely, use one character. Second Person. Second person creates an intrusive intimacy. You experience the story almost as if you are there. It is close, and it can become overwhelming.
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In third-person point of view, the narrator uses the pronouns "he," "she," "they," or "it" to tell the story. Think of it as you the writer functioning as an outsider looking in at the action taking place.
The third-person point of view is the most commonly used perspective because of all the options it offers. This perspective affords the author more flexibility than the other two perspectives. If you write in this mode, you are the "onlooker" watching the action as it unfolds. It's as though someone was in a theatre watching a play take place with several actors.
Should you choose to write from this perspective, you can write in third-person omniscient, where the thoughts of all the characters are revealed to the reader, or you can choose third-person limited, where the reader sees into the mind of only one character—either throughout the entire novel or in specific sections.
The advantage of the third-person viewpoint is that the author can write from a broader perspective. The disadvantage is that it can be difficult to establish a connection with the reader.
As an example, you could choose a novel such as Leo Tolstoy's Anna Karenina. Writing from the third-person omniscient perspective allowed the author to be much freer with the plot than he could have been had he chosen to write in either of the two other points of view. Here he moves from the perspective of one character to another. Despite the advantage of the third person, beginning writers tend to fall back on the first person, either because it's easier or they are writing about themselves.
Even if your story is autobiographical, consider trying the third person. Doing this will help you view your story more dispassionately and allow you to tell it more effectively. It might also show you directions for the story you hadn't considered.
When choosing between a limited and omniscient perspective, it may be easier to use third-person limited, which still adheres closely to one person's point of view. Kazuo Ishiguro's novel The Remains of the Day is narrated by its central character, an English butler called Stevens, who recalls various events and incidents from the past in such a way as to constantly cast doubt on the dependability of his narration.
At one point we are presented with a prolonged and heated argument between Stevens and the housekeeper Miss Kenton about the butler's ailing father, also a member of the staff of the same country house. The argument is narrated in direct speech, suggesting an authentic recreation of the actual incident, but is followed by a piece of narration by Stevens that immediately undermines our trust in his version of events:.
But now that I think further about it, I am not sure Miss Kenton spoke quite so boldly that day. We did, of course, over the years of working closely together come to have some very frank exchanges, but the afternoon I am recalling was still early in our relationship and I cannot see even Miss Kenton having been so forward.
In fact, now that I come to think of it, I have a feeling it may have been Lord Darlington himself who made that particular remark to me that time he called me into his study some two months after that exchange with Miss Kenton outside the billiard room.
By that time, the situation as regards my father had changed significantly following his fall. These become more significant when placed against the wider historical and political backdrop of the story.
However, as the narrative unfolds, and in spite of Stevens' selective and constantly revised memory, Darlington is revealed as an unwitting pawn of Nazism.
The unreliability of Stevens' narration draws an implicit parallel between memory and history and shows both to be liable to distortion and manipulation, whether consciously or unconsciously.
We can see, then, that even when the identity of the narrator of a prose fiction is made clear to us, there are possibilities for uncertainty and ambiguity. So what are we to make of the next extract?. Please read the extract from A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man by James Joyce nowand consider what the narrative is describing, and try to characterise the narrative voice and perspective.
This is not at all an easy narrative voice to characterise. Indeed, it is difficult to define who is narrating at various points in the opening section of this novel. However, I hope you realised at least that, as with the other two extracts, this is an account of childhood experience. But can we detect some sort of order or pattern here? I think we can, though it is by no means obvious. The passage gives me the impression of an attempt to replicate a child's growing awareness of his world, the relationships between those who populate it, and the development of his facility for language.
The novel begins with an episode of storytelling as we have seen, though we can't be sure whether the child or the father is the actual speaker at that point.
A world of sensations, sight, sound, touch, smell, movement is invoked and gradually the wider world begins to impinge and we can see the child beginning to categorise and impose order on his growing knowledge; recognising different smells and the ages of the adults around him.
The sense of fragmentation remains strong, however, with the unexplained incident of the child hiding under the table we are not told why he is there or why he must apologise.
There are, of course, many other narrative methods open to novelists. For example, a novel might be written in the form of a diary, or be cast as a series of letters, or any one of a number of such devices. Making the decision to study can be a big step, which is why you'll want a trusted University.
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